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September 18, 2010

Forever, love



Shining candles, melting pools of wax, the white in your eyes, love.
Ceramic fingertips, full of life,
Smoky black eyelashed love,
Twilight tresses, sunshine lips,
Unsaid desires, waking dreams at dawn, love.
Satin sheets and flowery curtains.
Fading footsteps, breaking into a dance, love,
The melody written to the click of your feet.
Four rings, the crash of bad news, love.
Laughter which used to run through telephone wires, now hang dry.
Six feet under, frozen, gleaming love.
Heart-breaking tranquility, bone-crushing hurt.
Mahogany coffin, asphyxiating love,
The numbness to the world, a blurry vision,
Gloomy cemetery, melancholy farewell, love.
Gone, but always remembered.
Never forgotten, now and forever, love.

42 Mississippi:

Scribbling Girl said...

This made me sigh and yet I loved each and every word of it....I love ur style of expression......Gosh I missed reading u while was away....good to be back.....

And u make me love u more with each piece :)

Scribbling Girl said...

This made me sigh and yet I loved each and every word of it....I love ur style of expression......Gosh I missed reading u while was away....good to be back.....

And u make me love u more with each piece :)

Harini said...

I love your poetry :).

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Its an apt farewell poem, wish the dead too could read.

Unruly Rebel said...

truly the gist of happy love... :)
nicely expressed words, liked it a lot...


Namit,
My SPacE- Wen i was a boy

Pavitra .... said...

@ Scribbling Girl:
Hey thank you so very much!! Glad to hear from you!! :)
Cheers!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Harini:
Thank you so much dear! Take care!!

Crazy Diamond said...

listening to last ride home! wooohooo! nice music!

nikita said...

beautiful !!!!

great play with words..

QueenDesi said...

i love this post.
so sweet :)))

come and visit my site. if u like u can follow me. just tell me if u want me to follow u back :)

THE SECRET LIFE OF "D"

in Love&Light
Queen D

Pavitra .... said...

@ Blasphemous Aesthete:
Hey Thank you so much! Yeah I wish that too...

Pavitra .... said...

@ Unruly Rebel:
Thank you so much....
:) Take Care!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Di:
Hey thanks babe!! Glad you liked it so much!! :)
They're thrilled to hear that!!
Take care!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Nikita:
Thank you so much dear!
Cheers!

bebo ♥ said...

LOVED..

Harsha said...

liked the way u transformed the mood from start to finish..

Two words - Loved it!

Pavitra .... said...

@ QueenDesi:
Hey thank you so much.....
I'm glad you visited....and I'll visit yours too!! :)
Cheers!!

Pavitra .... said...

@ bebo:
aww..!! Thank you sweetie!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Harsha:
Hey thank you so much..!!
And, I'll try to be more regular with my posts....
:)
Cheers!!

nOt anyone you know said...

best of luck in love!

love your place =)

suruchi said...

omg...another beautiful shade of love from the ever so unexpected bag of your goodies...

Blog more..u are missed when u don't...and keeps stirring us with your poetic magnificence:-)

Miles Of Style said...

gosh this is beautiful, touching and simply lovely!

Cinderella said...

Loved this. The undercurrent of a calm repertoire, of reminiscence of memories and epiphanies looming large.

Wonderful Pavitra!

Pavitra .... said...

@ nOt anyone you know :
thank you so much....do visit more!! :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ suruchi:
Hey sweetie!
Thank you so much for the wonderful things you've said...
I'm glad you loved it so much...
I'll try to write more often...
Cheers!!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Miles of style:
Thank you so much dear...
:)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Cinderella:
Thank you very much...
I'm so happy you liked it..
do visit more dear..!!
Cheers!

Goody said...

Pavitra.. I really enjoyed your work, deep and interesting.

Keep writing.

Regards

Goody said...

Pavitra.. I really enjoyed your work, deep and interesting.

Keep writing.

Regards

Ria said...

Loved the way its been written.

Pavitra .... said...

@ Goody:
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it...Do visit more :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Ria:
Thank you so much dear! :)

Sh@s said...

Love never dies, it breathes within even when the lover is long gone.

Stiah.W said...

neat!
:)

Sneha said...

Lovely.

rantravereflect/ jane said...

well , if ya wanna watch this feeling on celluloid, --> watch vampire diaries- the new vampire series :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Sh@s:
It sure does...lasts forever... :)
Thanks!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Stiah.W:
Thank you so much!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Sneha:
Thank you so much! :)
Cheers!

Pavitra .... said...

@ rantravereflect/ jane:
Ohh yes...I've heard of it...I'll have to take out some time and watch it.. :)

MangoMan said...

Strange.

Pavitra .... said...

@ MangoMan:
:))