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July 9, 2010

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I don't know how to tell you what I'm going through right now...
Its said, the world revolves around money, my world revolves around you,
My life was in utter turmoil and you came and bandaged the broken and frayed person that I was,
You gave me my smile back....you gave me a reason to want to live again...
You are the reason I look forward to tomorrow...
You are the reason I left my sadness behind..
Whenever I hear your name, I cannot help smiling...
Nothing can replace that in my heart...
You are the reason why I write....
Now the sands of time seem to run out fast....and I really wish I could just freeze this moment..
I stay up late at night...hoping my day becomes longer in the process...
Its a futile attempt...
The sky is getting darker, but my thoughts are clear,
Being away from you, my love, is something I'll always fear,
But never did I expect, the truth was so near,
My promises are forever true, and are straight from my heart,
I yearn for a true tomorrow, where we are never apart....


52 Mississippi:

nikita said...

ah...its so touching.

wish u both be happy forever together..
all i wana say is enjoy your present.don't worry of what would happen in future..have faith on god and your love.

keep smiling...lots of love..

anamika said...

This really brought tears in my eyes..how can one write so deeply..

Scribbling Girl said...

Ouch made me remember a phase I went through a while back ....u really write a way it touches within!
Keep up!

Readers Dais said...

thats the magic of love same with the post :)

Meher....all out to explore..!! said...

Love..!!Totally talks about how i feel now.You've echoed my feelings in here.lovely post.

Pooja said...

Ah! Love!

Beautiful!

Harsha said...

is this from a third person point of view?

if not, give a knock on his head and bring him back to his senses..

Anonymous Someone said...

Reading the first few lines, and I wished to listen to a song from The Fray - How to save a Life...

The lines reminded me of the song, and then the mood continued along just like the song....
nice read

Cheers
Blasphemous

HaRy!! said...

why so serious!! ... hmm very touching...i cud relate it somewhere

♦ Crazy Diamond ♦ said...

not easy at all being apart.. but then, the wait does get over someday :)

Tamanna A. Shaikh said...

Are you a Saggi by any chance? I haven't seen anyone else soo passionate! :)

Nostalgic said...

Loved it .. I have been there a while ago. All I'd say is have faith in your relationship and hold onto it :)

p.s you write really well.

suruchi said...

Hi Pavitra...
I wish u never go apart either...
Love’s greatest irony is that it tests you forever...
Every bliss follows a low but thankfully a bliss would again flow!

Keep the faith!
And keep giving love...nothing is a sure shot way of getting it back in return:-)

Sovina said...

very deeply written...lovely.

Splurgerina said...

lovely! And the picture in the end was a perfect visual for the last line! Sooo cute!

Pavitra .... said...

@ nikita:
Thank you dear..I do have a lot of faith in my love...more faith than I have in anything else...But the fear of leaving is getting to me big time!
Take care!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Anamika:
Hey! Thank you so much sweetie! :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Scribbling Girl:
Thanks dear! I know the phase is for only a few years...but now that its nearing...its becoming more and more scary :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Readers Dais:
Thanks a ton!! Yup, the magic of love is beautiful!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Meher:
Thank you so much dear...
We just have to have faith in our love... :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Pooja:
Hey!! Thanks sweetie!! :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Harsha:
Nope, its just me...and I don't have to get him to his senses...he knows...and he is dreading the day too... :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Anonymous Someone:
Yeah, the song has a similar atmosphere...
Thanks a ton!!
Cheers!

Pavitra .... said...

@ HaRy:
Thanks dear...Yeah, a bit serious post, I know...
Take care...

Pavitra .... said...

@ Dips:
Thanks babes! I'm waiting for the wait to get over...I'm wishing the time towards the wait goes as slowly as possible :)
Hugs!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Tamanna:
No, I'm a Virgo... :)
Thanks dear!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Nostalgic:
Thanks dear...I do have tremendous faith in my relationship...
Cheers!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Suruchi:
Thanks dear...
I too wish I'll never have to wait...
Its true, they say that true love should be given a chance to fail...
:)
I'll always keep the faith!! :)
Hugs!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Sovina:
Thanks dear...!
Take care..
Cheers! :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Splurgy:
Thanks a ton sweetie! :)

♥ ♥ Strawberry ♥ ♥ said...

veryyy sweet...!!
lucky ppl in love...
*awwness*

Harsha said...

awww.. thats sad.. take care n dnt lose heart.. the perfect somebody might be just arnd the corner..

Pavitra .... said...

@ Strawberry:
Aww thanks!! You're right...Lucky people in love!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Harsha:
Oh...You're wrong! He is the perfect someone...I'm just dreading moving away for 2-3 years for my higher studies...And that time is coming closer...

Harsha said...

then i misunderstood completely.. my bad.. sorry.. anyways, its only 2-3 yrs.. keep in mind there is rest of ur life still there for u.. cheers! :)

Cinderella said...

Love...that one feeling of being of so vulnerable at the hands of somebody else...that it makes you wanna fly.

God bless hon.

K-ay said...

I loved it. Esp the third line. You always find the best pictures to go with your post :)

Indrayani said...

I am on your blog after such a long long time...
Been so out of touch and not online for days now!
This is beautiful...
Love the blog new look and the write up..
Very deep... I was in like a trance when I read it....
hard to put it in words....

:)
Hope u have been great?

Vinda Sonata said...

been there in that kind of feeling. kind of liberating; sweet, sour, and bitter mixed into one sort of stuff. you're a very talented writer. i look forward to see more from you!

love,
vinda

Pavitra .... said...

@ Harsha:
No problem!! :D
Yes, I have lots more to go! Thats what is keeping me going...

Pavitra .... said...

@ Cinderella:
Hey thank you!! Yup, Its a wonderful feeling!
Thanks for following! :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ K-ay:
Thanks sweetie! :)
Glad you liked it!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Indi:
Hey dear! Its great to hear from you after so long!! Thank you so much for your sweet comment!
Do come more often!
Cheers!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Vinda Sonata:
Hey! Thank you for visiting...You're right...I'm going through that bitter-sweet phase... But its beautiful! Thank you very much!
Do visit again!!
Take care!

Ria said...

Loved it....so deep n profound!!

Shantanu said...

hats off girl..!! once again u conquered.

uglyduckling91 said...

:)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Ria:
Thank you so much dear! :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Shantanu:
Thanks a lot..!! :D

Pavitra .... said...

@ uglyduckling91:
Thanks! :)

Okie said...

Great invoking of emotions. Very nice.

lovetales said...

That was very touchy!!!

Good work!