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June 11, 2010

Tears and rain ---- Law of Gravity

The falling teardrop scorns the rain,

One falls for pleasure, the other for pain,

But they both drop down, and they both do die,

Under the starry infinite sky,

They start from grey, and they fall with grace,

One from the skies and one from the face,

One from the clouds, the other from the eyes,

As they strike the earth, their mockeries fly,

They fly in the wind, their bodies don’t rust,

They swim in the seas and sleep with the dust,

Euphemism then conquers, and the emptiness in their fight show,

Even if they bathe in the sun, and consume the sea, the voids only grow.

We are all equal, then why do we fight?

Who are we to advice wrong from right?

We are like water, small drops of it,

With the same white noise, on the ground we hit,

With a reminiscence of a magnificent fall,

and a splendid life, we never lived at all ,

The descend is their life and life is a fall,

Even though they survive now, die they must all….

24 Mississippi:

Shantanu said...

such a spellbound words. great work. stay happy.

buckingfastard said...

its always pleasant to land on a blog and find the post titled "tears nd rain" :)

luvd the comparisions and similarities of differences :)

luvd it!!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Shantanu:
Thank you so much! :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Buckingfastard:
Oh right! Its your blog's name!
Glad you loved it..!! Keep visiting...

Insane Mind said...

your blog hass the most amazing picture i have ever seen.................and off course the words............the words that connect well,,,, reallly well....

Raghav said...

lovely words
awesome picture
did u click it?

Pavitra .... said...

@ Insane Mind:
Thank you so much for all your kind words...Keep visiting and hope you have a wonderful day!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Raghav:
Thank you very very much...
No I didn't click the it online :)
Keep visiting!! Cheers!

Splurgerina said...

You make me want to write poems again! I've read the tears and rain comparison many times but not quite the way you've done it was beautiful! And you actually made it rhyme as well..which is even harder! good work:)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Splurgerina:
You should write poems...I bet they'll be really good..
Thank you so much sweetheart...
Take care and have a lovely day!

Scribbling Girl said...

wow what a beautiful poem.
Ur comparitive work was so beautifully done...made me wanting to write poems on rains and tears once again.
I liked the expression u melted out and the flow was beautiful.
Great work

Harini said...

ah! Its beautiful :).

muthu said...

Lucid words....

Kudos. :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Scribbling Girl:
Thank you so much! Take care!

Pavitra .... said...

@ Harini:
Thanks sweetie! :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Muthu:
Thank you so very much!

Tamanna A. Shaikh said...

This is a really beautiful poem. You've written it really well. The only phrase that kind of didn't fit(to me) was : their mockeries fly. I think it can be more poetic. Also, I'm sure you know but even if you skip some rhymes attimes, it can be really beautiful!

I love the deep meaning and the striking comparison of the tears and rain. Lovely thoughts, PAvitra!! Realy like. You have alot of talent there! :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Tamanna:
Thank you so much sweetie! And thanks for your suggestion....Yes, its true that if you skip the rhymes, it can still be beautiful...

Actually, I've described both the tear and the rain in a battle, "their mockeries fly" refers to their attack with words as soon as they reach the Earth (like arrows flying towards each other)

Harsha said...

nice play of words here.. keep them coming.. cheers!

anamikasureka said...

hey first time on your blog...

you really play beautifully with words.:)

Following you:)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Harsha:
Thank you very much! :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ anamikasureka:
Thank you so very much for your kind words..
And thanks for following! :)
Keep visiting!! :)

Persis Shah said...

just passing by your blog and i have to say i LOVE it. do come drop by mine too and maybe we can follow each other. =)

have a lovely day!


Pavitra .... said...

@ Persis:
Thank you so very much...I'll surely visit your blog soon...