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May 16, 2010

Be my Cigar!


Be my cigar, honey,
Be my doorway to this earth,
Of sightless needs and smoky rings,
To love, to life and everything.

Like through your gorgeous eyes, the sunlight bleeds,
Be the fulfillment to my every need,
And when I get lost in your grin of pearls,
Help me chase away these smoky swirls.

Light this cigar for me, honey,
Burn for me, like I’ve burnt for you,
Confirm my addiction to this world,
Be my cigar honey,
Be my link to this world.

Help me escape from this frightening illusion,
These clouds of smoke and harsh confusion,
Escape from my lips, like a flood of lace,
Be by my side and don’t fall from grace.

Be my cigar, honey,
Be my doorway to this earth,
Of sightless needs and smoky rings,
To love, to life and everything.

8 Mississippi:

The Goddess of Boho said...

Fuck this poem is insanely awesome!
Quite unlike the usual crap people post on Blogspot.
Anyway, I just wanted to say, thanks for all your lovely comments :)
Secondly, the store that is selling my bags is Azaad bazaar.
Google them or mail me I'll have something sent to you directly :)
Are you into Indian bags and Jholas?
Because that is what I mainly do.
Anyway let me know :)

karishma.rajani@hotmail.com

K-ay here btw :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ K-ay:
Thank you so much sweetie! Thanks for visiting my blog...
Yup, i do like Indian bags...I'll surely visit the store soon..! I checked the site...and i loved the stuff...!

chandan kumar said...

hey hi
You are getting really good...
very nicely done...
I love the lines...and the prompt..
awesome!

Pavitra .... said...

@ chandan kumar:
Thank you very much! :)
glad you liked it!

sanely insane said...

funny u used the metaphor of cigar...interesting :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ sanely insane:
Haha...I wanted something which would describe addiction...and nothing could beat the cigar! :)

Pesto Sauce said...

True nothing beats Cigar for addiction....I once took the one my boss was smoking in a party and never returned

Pavitra .... said...

@ Pesto Sauce:
Oh..thats bad..
Thats the reason why I never will try....