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June 9, 2009

My first attempt at 55 - Fiction!

YOUR PRESENCE:

Scurrying around the house in the midst of some work, she stepped on something soft and furry.


She shrieked in fear, “Oh! I’m so sorry Sally!”


She looked down. It was only the kitchen mat.


She sighed.


“I miss you fur-ball!”




16 Mississippi:

Arv said...

lol...

tat was a good one mate... take care... cheers...

Ki said...

Awwwwww! I love cats and I LOVE 55 fiction so this was perfect! :D

Arjun said...

Oh God..!! Good one...

There was everything.. tension.. emotion... .. good :)

Cheers..!!
Arjun

Arnab Majumdar said...

Awesome! Never quite seen a 55f like that one... :)

Anurag said...

wow ...liked the idea...it seems we kinda had debut on 55 fiction together :D

nice one this :)

Pavitra .... said...

@ Arv:
Thank you so much!

@ Ki:
I'm glad you liked it. To be honest, I was really waiting for you comment...Thank you so much dear..

@ Arjun:
Thanks a lot...! It means a lot to me... :)

@ Arnab:
Thanks a lot... :) :)

@Anurag;
Thank you so much...
Wow! thats quite a coincidence...
Loved your 55F too!

Vinnie said...

that's cute!

hoping Sally is a little kitten..i'm scared of cats :}

sanely insane said...

its good...real good

sorry abt sally...

my friend got a lil baby cat recently :)

the cat and the dog get along well :P

Chriz said...

i thought she purposely stomped on the kitten.. i would have done that :P

Aniket said...

That was real good stuff being your first attempt at 55WF. I know how tough they are by my one and only attempt. :P

The fur ball is really cute (though am more of a dog person :))

Pavitra .... said...

@ Vinnie:
No actually...The pics are of my cats Ginger and Felix.

@ Sanely Insane:
Hey..Its ok...! Oh..they get along...thats really nice...

@ Chriz:
Very funny Chriz.. :P

@ Aniket:
Thank you so much...

Vyshu said...

Hey.

Brilliant !

Nice blog..will come back to go through other post as well..:)

cheers,
vyshu

d gypsy! said...

was good... go on writing more...

Amal Bose said...

that was cute..

keep smiling :)

Zeba Talkhani said...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwn. Cute

Vigneshwar said...

Loved it heart touching yet simple